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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3690 on: November 02, 2018, 12:28:59 AM »
In the book, it looks like Sheridan's position was US AID FSR 4

from other sources, FSR 5 was equivalent to an army captain, and was for technicians.
FSR 5 was lower than FSR 4.

FSR 4 was reserved for supervisory jobs.

There were in-grade promotions...if you did good, you could get one per year.

So Sheridan's FSR 4 status means he wasn't bottom rung..Makes the $20k sound more plausible..

In fact, Sheridan's character brags that FSR 4 is equivalent to brigadier general..I suppose in pay scale!
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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3691 on: November 02, 2018, 12:31:12 AM »
It's happening Bruce.
It doesn't matter what people think.

Get Sheridan to lawyer up or something.

Theft? Hmm, there are other places to debate things like theft, rather than an internet forum.

Read 'em and weep.

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Snow, as much as I would love to read an actual print version of Sheridan's book - and as grateful I have been to receive the PDF version from you back when - printing it now without his direct, expressed consent is wrong. Regardless of your intentions, I consider it a theft. I wouldn't be surprised if Petey thought so, too.

Sheridan's inability to get his book published is part of his mystery. It's also part of his story, of who he is.
 

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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3692 on: November 02, 2018, 12:33:42 AM »
Basically, Sheridan's treated me like an ass.

He doesn't deserve any extra kid-gloves handling from me.

He dug his own hole. He's a Marine, he can dig his way out.

The only constraint: I acknowledge he's 92 years old. So elder abuse is a fair thing to be concerned about.
 

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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3693 on: November 02, 2018, 12:37:41 AM »
Publishing a book nowadays isn't a matter of meeting some standard. It's just work.
Sheridan's just too old to do the work.
I'm doing it for him.
Thank you very much.

Sheridan put a lot of work into it. The detail is staggering. Tiresome sure. But hell, Pynchon was an ass too.

Tired of listening to him whine and rant. He abuses the internet. The internet gets to abuse him back, sometimes, I think.
 

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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3694 on: November 02, 2018, 02:27:51 AM »
Well, that didn't take long. I went out for a bite to eat and when I got back I had an email waiting for me from Bobby B declaring that he has an existing claim to publish Petey's book - saying they entered into an agreement to publish several years ago, with emails, etc. to prove it.

Now this could be One Hellava Mud Wrestling Match!
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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3695 on: November 02, 2018, 02:34:06 AM »
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It's happening Bruce.
It doesn't matter what people think.

What people think does matter, in my view. As much as I would love to read and own a copy of your Petey-Lulu publication, I don't think it is proper, and I wanted to state that publicly.
 

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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3696 on: November 02, 2018, 02:55:23 AM »
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Well, that didn't take long. I went out for a bite to eat and when I got back I had an email waiting for me from Bobby B declaring that he has an existing claim to publish Petey's book - saying they entered into an agreement to publish several years ago, with emails, etc. to prove it.

Now this could be One Hellava Mud Wrestling Match!

Will Bobby be represented by Mickey, Dickey, and Howe?  :rofl:
 

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« Reply #3697 on: November 02, 2018, 03:05:09 AM »
Sheridan had the book for sale online. He wanted it available to the public then and now. He said Amazon took it down. I dont think that is accurate but what he did make clear is that he did not remove it.

Snow is restoring online sale of the same book at the same site where it previously resided, Lulu. He is sending 100% of any income to Sheridan.

You can get all lawyered up and indignant or you can look at it another way.
A train got derailed. Some good samaritan is putting it back on the track, for free.

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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3698 on: November 02, 2018, 03:12:19 AM »
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Sheridan had the book for sale online. He wanted it available to the public then and now. He said Amazon took it down. I dont think that is accurate but what he did make clear is that he did not remove it.

Snow is restoring online sale of the same book at the same site where it previously resided, Lulu. He is sending 100% of any income to Sheridan.

You can get all lawyered up and indignant or you can look at it another way.
A train got derailed. Some good snaritan is putting it back on the track, for free.

377

Ask to see a copy of Blevins' contract and his filing socalled!   >:D  Blevins has threatened people for years and people gave in to him - he has never shown his cards once relying on fear and intimidation to get his way. He may have Sheridan intimidated. Ask to see his contract with Sheridan!   
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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3699 on: November 02, 2018, 04:34:44 AM »
Petey getting in bed with Bobby B?

Whew, I never saw that one comin'.

Speaking of RMB, he set a personal record for most emails sent to me within a two-hour period - 7. He's crowing like a rooster. I can hear him all the way from Auburn. Sigh.
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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3700 on: November 02, 2018, 04:59:50 AM »
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Petey getting in bed with Bobby B?

Whew, I never saw that one comin'.

Speaking of RMB, he set a personal record for most emails sent to me within a two-hour period - 7. He's crowing like a rooster. I can hear him all the way from Auburn. Sigh.

Of course he would try to get some elderly guy nailed down, in Cooperland. That's what Bobby is all about. That was his tactic with Kenny and his elderly family and friends, why not Petey! That was visible from 500 miles away. Bobby knows who to pitch to -  :rofl: 
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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3701 on: November 02, 2018, 06:50:05 AM »
Bobby is very busy in the background. he's now claiming some guy with money wants to buy part of the Ariel store. he's been hassling Bryan Woodruff to sell 51% while stating in his first of many emails that he's staying out of it? okay, so give the guy Bryan's contact info and "stay out of it" ?

Bruce, how close was I on Robert getting wind of this? he watches this site "like a hawk"

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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3702 on: November 02, 2018, 10:40:09 AM »
Bruce:
Here's how I think of it.

Remember in 1971 when we went to the Grateful Dead concert at Gaelic Park in NY, and it was the first time you dropped acid, and I taped the concert with a mike taped to the end of a crutch I held upside down on my shoulders? And we played that tape endlesslly on road trips and at parties. And finally I said "You know, I'm going to put this on the web. Everyone should hear it"

The only questions are should it be free or should I collect money for Sheridan. And what price to put on it if so. And whether Sheridan doesn't want his name on it as author.

Information wants to be free. Welcome to the brave new world. Remember when bands panicked and started suing when mp3's were being distributed surreptiously? Those who embraced the future and went to a mp3 distribution model succeeded.

Fighting the digitization of the world, fails.
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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3703 on: November 02, 2018, 10:53:57 AM »
If people want to waste some time trying to influence me,
you can articulate support for these possibilties

1) Make it freely downloadable on a website outside of Lulu and Amazon
2) Make it free on Lulu and Amazon
3) Charge around $10 on Lulu and Amazon

And all of the above with these possible modifiers
A) Don't put Sheridan Anderson as author
B) Don't put Frightful Laughter as title

The characters are all made up. Any resemblance to people living or dead is coincidental, isn't it?

My belief is that Sheridan is best served by charging $10 on Amazon and Lulu, with everything as close to his initial publication as possible.
I'm making minor spelling and punctuation corrections, because I think that will be appreciated by readers, and doesn't detract from the essence of the book. I'm not adding or removing any words.

It will be normal 6x9 US trade, so it should meet all distribution requirements for maximizing money to Sheridan.
 

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Re: Suspects And Confessions
« Reply #3704 on: November 02, 2018, 11:04:07 AM »
Sheridan has some bad writing habits. It's interesting to see the sentence structures he repeatedly uses.

His overuse of the word "however" is painful at times.

One punctuation thing I'm wrestling with, is how he frequently uses semicolon, then "however" between two phrases that are opposing thoughts.
It would read better, if the however was removed..2 short sentences would be better...it's not necessary to point out to the reader that the thoughts go against each other.

In the original document, there is no comma after however.
But, the better usage is to add a comma so it it flows better for the reader. My microsoft word suggests that style

Example:
Original
Grecco both admired and despised Max; however if he had known Max's parents, he might have felt more conciliatory.

My edit:
Grecco both admired and despised Max; however, if he had known Max's parents, he might have felt more conciliatory.

These are the things I worry about, not RMB.

But Sheridan likes long complex sentences with lots of clauses. He just needs some commas. Sometimes he has unnecessary commas. He also is weak at recognizing all the places that need hyphenated words.

He's stunningly good at getting all his Vietnamese nouns spelled correctly everywhere. And names and places..all accurate with the same spelling everywhere. It stuns me that he did this 11 years ago when he was 81.
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