Sheridan has some bad writing habits. It's interesting to see the sentence structures he repeatedly uses.
His overuse of the word "however" is painful at times.
One punctuation thing I'm wrestling with, is how he frequently uses semicolon, then "however" between two phrases that are opposing thoughts.
It would read better, if the however was removed..2 short sentences would be better...it's not necessary to point out to the reader that the thoughts go against each other.
In the original document, there is no comma after however.
But, the better usage is to add a comma so it it flows better for the reader. My microsoft word suggests that style
Example:
Original
Grecco both admired and despised Max; however if he had known Max's parents, he might have felt more conciliatory.
My edit:
Grecco both admired and despised Max; however, if he had known Max's parents, he might have felt more conciliatory.
These are the things I worry about, not RMB.
But Sheridan likes long complex sentences with lots of clauses. He just needs some commas. Sometimes he has unnecessary commas. He also is weak at recognizing all the places that need hyphenated words.
He's stunningly good at getting all his Vietnamese nouns spelled correctly everywhere. And names and places..all accurate with the same spelling everywhere. It stuns me that he did this 11 years ago when he was 81.