I think we're coming to a meeting of the minds on his new draft.
It's like negotiating something at Versailles.
It's funny, he's like a typical author, arguing he doesn't need corrections/editting, arguing he's been an english teacher and journalist.
Meanwhile, the email has a couple of spelling errors and unclear sentences.
I'm being diplomatic. I learned how to get along with people who have different opinions by frequenting DBC forums
"Why, Cleaver, old boy, I do believe you've overlooked the yield strength on India rubber bands above the 40th parallel. Can I get another quinine please? This reminds me of the time we ran out of both rubber bands and quinine on the Isthmus. I'm sure you appreciate the contribution of my firsthand knowledge?"